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These days,I find some classmates of mine are not interested in English.They say that English is difficult to learn and lose their confident to learn English.As a student in charge of English study,I think I should encourage them to pick up their confident to learn English.In my opinion,study English is an important thing.English is a language which use the most all over the world.If we communicate with foreigner,we need speak English.And nowadays,many books,movies,and newspapers and so on are written in English.Only we study English can we know the things that they say in.So,we should try our best to learn English.But how can we master this language and get good grace?I have some advice.First,we must be careful and take note in class.Second,we should listen more,read more and speak more.It's a good way to learn English.Third,we can communicate with others in our spare time to improve our spoken English.What is the most important is to be confident with yourself.Believe that you can make progress in English.