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GRE写作Issue模拟题8:Pursuing One's Ideals

发布时间:2013-07-17 16:47浏览次数:2025
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“Many people believe that a few individuals or small groups (family, friends, teachers, celebrities, for example) have caused them to think and behave in the way they do. Yet it is always society as a whole that defines us and our attitudes, not a few individuals.”
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In recent years, more and more people are concerned the problem of how to pursue ourselves` ideals. As to me, I think that pursuing one`s ideals can only lead to the greater interests, certainly, the foundation of do not violate morality and law. To bolster my opinion, I will explore the argument as following. First of all, each person all have own dream. And pursuing one`s ideals is everyone want to do.

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