GRE写作Issue模拟题8:Pursuing One's Ideals

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In recent years, more and more people are concerned the problem of how to pursue ourselves` ideals. As to me, I think that pursuing one`s ideals can only lead to the greater interests, certainly, the foundation of do not violate morality and law. To bolster my opinion, I will explore the argument as follows. First of all, each person all has own dream. And pursuing one`s ideals is everyone want to do.