2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Go shopping on the internet is become a fashion activity now. Go shopping on the windows is a good way to buy things, it is convenient, safety, and it can refuse a lot of time for us. Lots of people especially young people and women,they buy everything through the internet, whatever anywhere. So it's also brings some serious things to us. It makes some people don't work when they are in the working time, make young people dislike study on their classes, they only know shopping.What's more, they wasted an amount of money, haven't no money to buy dinner,it's harms to healthy,and will makes people fall ill easier. So, in my opinion,go shopping on the internet have controlled is necessary, we can do it when we are freed but not in working times or study times.