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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5301
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题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分85.5分
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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Online Shopping Online shopping has grown up to be a fashion trend. Because of convenience, people in growing numbers prefer online shopping- some even have got accustomed to it. Online shopping enables us to acquire both good service and low price, even if we needn`t receive goods outside the door. Online stores give us variety kinds of goods to choose, such as food, books clothes, and electronic products, etc. We just look at the screen to select the things that we want to buy, and then click the button; it is very easy and convenient. Nevertheless, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, online shopping brings convenience and low-price-goods to us. It also brings some problems to customers. Firstly, we just see the pictures and introductions on the net, but we cannot see the actual products. If the shopper sends a defective product to us, we would spend our own money for postage to change it. Secondly, many online stores often exaggerate their goods` function to lure people to buy. Last but not least, our personal information might be exposed when we are looking through the web pages. In a word, there are both pros and cons of online shopping. We should pay greater attention to protect ourselves during buying things online.

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