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Online Shopping Online shopping has grown up to be a fashion trend. Because of convenience, people in growing numbers prefer online shopping- some even have got accustomed to it. Online shopping enables us to acquire both good service and low price, even if we needn`t receive goods outside the door. Online stores give us variety kinds of goods to choose, such as food, books clothes, and electronic products, etc. We just look at the screen to select the things that we want to buy, and then click the button; it is very easy and convenient. Nevertheless, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, online shopping brings convenience and low-price-goods to us. It also brings some problems to customers. Firstly, we just see the pictures and introductions on the net, but we cannot see the actual products. If the shopper sends a defective product to us, we would spend our own money for postage to change it. Secondly, many online stores often exaggerate their goods` function to lure people to buy. Last but not least, our personal information might be exposed when we are looking through the web pages. In a word, there are both pros and cons of online shopping. We should pay greater attention to protect ourselves during buying things online.
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