2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays,our life quantity become better and the shop become more and more than before.However,a lot of shops are on excessive packaging which are waste nature things.The reason why many shops have this phenomenon is that they want to increase the prise of their product and earn more profict.Of course,the beautiful packaging can appear more customs.For one thing,people like the expensive product beacause they may send it to others and the beautiful packaging can make them fell more confident.But I think this is not a good phenomenon. Different people have diffent opinion.As me,on the one hand,excessive packaging can let the third product become more active so that devolope our economic level.On the other hand,it is unnessaserry to waste money and time to buy the package.You know the product itself is more important than its package.Our socail prefer to live with a green method.So,I think excessive packaging is unnessesary.