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1995年专四作文真题范文:Discuss part-time job

发布时间:2013-05-15 00:49浏览次数:1984
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Direction:Nowadays it has become fashionable for college students to take a part-time job in their spare time. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
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Internship is necessary for graduation,especially for those who want to work directly after graduation.However,is part-time job worthwhile indeed?The following is illustrating advantages. It is universally accepted that college students possess spare time than almost any period they had.Part-time job fills your spare time.Meanwhile,you can learn numerous skills from it.Furthermore,it is the first step of getting to know the realities of society.It cultivates your specific personalities. Nuturally,part-time job isn't a best choice for every college students.It also means dangerous ang harmful.Anyone who isn't able to balance life of studying and working isn't suppose to take part-time job.This real world is abound in danger factors.Part-time job takes your precious time and it pays lesser.Sometimes it leads to low self-esteem. Last ,my heatry advice is never running with crowd.Be yourself.Only pursuit things that you are interested in

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