雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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Many countries open their gates to China today. If you have a passport, you can go to many countries. It is a good thing for many Chinese. First of all, people can visit other countries. Local people had a short view. Visiting different countries is a good choice to color your sight. If you are a photographer, you will like to travel from different country. You might take lots of amazing pictures from different country. Besides, air planes now make people’s trip becoming short and fast. People might take three or four hour from one place to another. Air planes makes people can travel in a short period of time. People can flexible schedule their time and get good rest. Secondly, people can get to know other countries culture. Nowadays, internet makes the world smaller. People can learn things without going out. Yet, it is not real for many people. You cannot know a nation’s culture without contact it. Take Christmas for example. You might learn American’s Christmas from internet, or your friends. You might think that you have already know what it is an American’s Christmas day, until you arrive America and feel Christmas day yourself. What is the lights like, what Christmas food tastes like, what would people do in Christmas day, all of these you could not feel it from internet or other people. Therefore, traveling is a good method to learn different country’s culture. Traveling convenient and easier makes people not just saving time, but also learn different culture from different countries. I believe that traveling convenient and easier it is a good effect for many Chinese.