托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第16篇:了解国家时事是否重要

拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

In recent days, more and more people are concerned about events happening around the world, no matter whether or not related to oneself. As to me, my opinion is to understand the events happening around the world within my ability. To bolster my stance, I explore the point as following. First of all, it is more important through more concerned about national affairs to broaden our vision and minds. We as national citizens are as same as the parts on the big machine like state. Only through the national events, can we realize our position in the country. And the effect of national events can tell us idea of others, then we can do the best decide to comfort the trend of the case. Sometimes, we can not immediately response the trend, most of all is because our fixed ideal. So to use the national events is a very useful tool to break out rigid ideal. Next, to avoid make a bad decision, we must actually interpret national events within our ability. For example, genetically modified food whether to enter the market, and it is safe, is not it? Like the problem, the official likely do not give the correct statement, we only through our professional knowledge, can we judge it really a good thing. If we lack this ability, we do not speak it right or wrong at best. In sum, seriously, events happening around the world are related to you, we must concerned about it. And in a relaxing way, some national events that is only as chat content appear at one`s leisure, because it is too far from us.