2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；作者词汇基础挺好，能灵活使用部分学术词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉。

Nowadays,computer is playing a more and more important role in people's life.It brings convenince to people ,as well, they do haove some disappointing influence. On the one hand,people can find almost everything via computer.And with a computer,they can get in touch with their family.even the world easily.Besides,computers provide people with fantasy online games whengetting bored. On the other hand,numberous people have already observed the harm computers does to the young.Fantasy computer games not only make them relaxed,but also addicted.As a result,they can not perform as well as they used to do in academic exams.Likewise,spending too much time facing the screen will definitely do harm to their eyesight. As a proverb puts it,every coin has two sides,there is no exception with the daily-updating computers.What we should do is to find a exact way to balance working and playing,and parents should led their children to use the double-edged sword in a right way.