2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。

Nowadays,computer is playing a more and more important role in people's life.It brings convenience to people,as well, they do have some disappointing influence. On the one hand,people can find almost everything via computer.And with a computer,they can get in touch with their family,even the world easily.Besides,computers provide people with fantasy online games when getting bored. On the other hand,numberous people have already observed the harm computers does to the young.Fantasy computer games not only make them relaxed,but also addicted.As a result,they can not perform as well as they used to do in academic exams.Likewise,spending too much time facing the screen will definitely do harm to their eyesight. As a proverb puts it,every coin has two sides,there is no exception with the daily-updating computers.What we should do is to find a exact way to balance working and playing,and parents should led their children to use the double-edged sword in a right way.