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How should parents Help Children to be independent Nowadays more and more family just has one child in the society,so the parent will spoil their child very much.Everything for children will be done by parents,which will make the child to establish a habit to dependent. It is general to see that parens help their kid to eat,to walk,to do everythintg,but less to help them to do by themself.Why parents think their child could not do everything by their children?Is it the child no capibility to do by themself?In fact,some cases prove that some child could do something by themself.For example,Kids will eat food by themself when their hungry;walking by themsrlf,and so on. All in all,It is more important for parents to take some ways to help their children to be independents instead to doing everything by their own.First,stopping to help your children who could handle it;second,encouraging your children to do something by themself;last but not leave,Guiding your children to help other more.
