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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5519
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
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1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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How should parents Help Children to be independent Nowadays more and more family just have child in the society,so the parent will spoil their child very much.Everything for child will be done by parent,which will make the child to establish habit of dependent. It is general to see that paren help their kid to eat,to walk,to do everythintg,but less to help them to do by themselfs.Why parent think their children could not do everything by themselfs?Is it the children without capability to do by themselfs?In fact,some cases prove that some children could do something by themselfs.For example,Kids will eat food by themselfs when their hungry;walking by themsrlfs,and so on. All in all,It is more important for parents to take some ways to help their children to be independents instead to doing everything by their own.First,stopping to help your children who could handle it;second,encouraging your children to do something by themselfs;last but not leave,Guiding your children to help other more.

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