2010年湖南高考测试题写作范文：毕业留言

作者词汇量积累很好，学术词汇积累要重视；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

Dear Li Hua: We are ready to graduate from our high school in two weeks and we will try our best to be admitted to an ideal university.I prefer to stay in the south,while you decide to leave for the north.Therefore,we are likely to be far away.We have made a deep friendship with each other,and have a happy time together.Facing to be away,I have many things to tell you,but I don't know what to say except wishes. In my mind,you are always enthusiastic and lend me a hand when I was in trouble. I still remember,I faired in an important test,and I was very sad.I couldn't study well in maths,and I was very pained.Maybe you realised my trouble and gave me some useful skills and suggestions even if I had told nothing to you.With you help,I got successful gradually.I appreciated it what you did. I wish you can make your dream come true and enter a key university. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Ping