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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46105
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;句式变化较丰富,若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

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Nowadays,the children willing to spend much more time playing but doing housework at home. However,there are some parents pay for money to child doing housework.Do you think this is a good idea ? Facing this issue,it has both advantages and disadvantages.the advantages are to let childs know the money is not easy to earn,also can stimulate their saving money potential.but the disadvantages is the child may igoner their study.instead of ,the child on the go to doing housework to earn more money,so that their can but whatever their want. In my opinion , I am in favor of the latter view that because this way not only can strengthen their awareness of responsibility but also can let their know is Not want to give how much is how much,you must do something befor you take it

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