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The Best Way to Stay Healthy Social development today has not only changed people's lifestyle,but also enhance consciousness of keep healthy.As we know,health is far more important than wealth.Therefore, a number of increasing put much attention on it . However,how to keep healthy?Which is the best way?Here are some tips.To begin with,you should have a balance diet.Much snack has a negative impact on your health,which can give rise to cancer.In order to stay healthy,you should eat well,sleep well and work well. Moreover,doing exercise is a goog way to keep fit as well as relax yourself.Just as a saying goes-only study not to play make jacks a dull boy. The relationship between exercise and work resembles this.If you indulged in work rather than in exercise,you body will break down someday.Besides,you should demand yourself have enough sleeping every day.Developing a good habit of early to go to bed,early to get up. In a word,you must take good care of you.Only in this way can you lead a happy and healthy life.
