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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5301
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题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。

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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication The picture shows that a father wants to know about his daughter`s school life, but his daughter responds him that he can see in her blog. There is no denying the fact that the Internet has impacted on interpersonal communication. On the one hand, the Internet has provided people with a convenient tool of communication, such as a mother can easily communicate with her son who studies in a university which far from their home, so they can chat with each other online by the Internet at any time. On the other hand, the Internet also has its negative aspect on people`s communication. Some people rely on communication online with other people, so that they are unwilling to chat with others face to face; it is a disadvantage effect to him to feel the other`s feeling when they chat with others. Event though, many students plays computer game all the time so that they are not interested in their study; it wastes their time and money to do useless things. In a word, the Internet is a double-edged-sword. In my opinion, we should take full advantage of its advantages to make us more convenient, rather than affected by its negative aspects.

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