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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication The picture shows that a father wants to know about his daughter`s school life, but his daughter responds him that he can see in her blog. There is no denying the fact that the Internet has impacted on interpersonal communication. On the one hand, the Internet has provided people with a convenient tool of communication, such as a mother can easily communicate with her son who studies in a university which far from their home, so they can chat with each other online by the Internet at any time. On the other hand, the Internet also has its negative aspect on people`s communication. Some people rely on communication online with other people, so that they are unwilling to chat with others face to face; it is a disadvantage effect to him to feel the other`s feeling when they chat with others. Event though, many students plays computer game all the time so that they are not interested in their study; it wastes their time and money to do useless things. In a word, the Internet is a double-edged-sword. In my opinion, we should take full advantage of its advantages to make us more convenient, rather than affected by its negative aspects.
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