2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

Computer and Man As far as we know,peple live in morden world with computer.It is clearly showing that computer has been a member of our family or office. Certainly,computer is helpful for man.Firstly,something we are not able to deal with can appear to computer.Therefore,it helps us to finish difficult work.Secondly,with the devolpment of the world,life turns to be quick,leading to computer save more time for us.Third is that we can relax by playing computer games. However,one coin has two sides.Computer is popular basing on tecelogic,and some games we devolop possibly absorb a little man.Besides,using computer for long time is not healthy for us.So,it is also having a bad effect. In my opinion,I consider that we ought to use it correctly,and not to be absorbed in computer.This is the best way which is not only using computer to help us word,but also keep our health.