2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Today computer had involt human life .And it had play an importent role in our life increasely .But computer really can replace human brain ?Though This question was disscused by us,it still could not catch a conclusion. Of couse ,computer have good function in many fields,and it is very convinent for using ,its certainly functions are not be replaced by brain,and brain can not match with its speed and knowledge.However,the computer have better function in every feild ,we are its controlors instead of it control us. As far as I concern was,hunman brain is a creater,while of the computer just a waiter .So we should not rely on computer in all aspect .The computer is a cool to help us ,many things need us to think about.