2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Today computer had in volt human life .And it had play an important role in our life increasely .But computer really can replace human brain ?Though This question was discused by us,it still could not get a conclusion. Of couse ,computer have good function in many fields,and it is very convinent for using ,it is certainly functions do not replaced by brain,and brain can not match with its speed and knowledge.However,the computer have better function in every feild ,its controlors is us instead of it control us. As far as I concern was,hunman brain is a crater,while of the computer just a waiter .So we should not rely on computer in all feilds .The computer is a cool to help us ,many things need us to think about.