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3． 参考词汇：经济困难 financial problem
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；请注意分段。
My hobby is surfing on the Internet to search for useful imformation,and what I really good at is photography,which I have learned its basic knowledge by myself.The purpose of application to the university is to study English so as to make my photos well known at home and abroad.In addtion,I would like to know about your requirements for overseas students as well as what kind of service the university would offer.By the way, last year,I paid a visit to my uncle living in Nottingham,who promised to sponsor my educational expenses,so there will not be any financial problem if I am admitted into University of Brington. In conclusion,I wish my dream of University of Brighton would come true.
