2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(95):留学信

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；可适当增加学术词汇的使用量。

My hobby ，as well as what I am really good at ,is photography，especially in foreground,as I have mastered its basic knowledge by myself.Often do I surf on the Internet to search for useful material and appreciate other camerists' well-known works,which,unfortunately,are difficult for me to understand,due to my poor English.Therefore,The purpose of my application to the university is to improve English so as to further my skill of photography. In addition,after my self-intriduction,may I have your requirements for overseas students in detail and what kind of service the university would offer,too?That will be of great favour. By the way, I paid a visit,last year, to my uncle living in Nottingham,who promised to sponsor my educationl fee,so there will not be any financial problem if I am admitted into University of Brington. In conclusion,I wish my dream of University of Brighton would come true.