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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(95):留学信

发布时间:2013-09-02 17:13浏览次数:267
要求:
假设你是李华,某中学学生,高中毕业后想到英国的布莱顿大学(University of Brighton)学习英语。请参照下面要点,写信给该校介绍你的情况,同时询问有关入学要求和学校提供何种服务。  
要点:  
1.    你现在的爱好和特长以及申请入学的目的;  
2.    询问有关外国学生入学要求和学校提供何种服务;  
3.    你叔叔在英国的诺丁汉(Nottingham),去年去看望过他;  
4.    你叔叔答应资助学费,无经济困难。  
注意:  
1.    词数为100左右;  
2.    信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);  

3.    参考词汇:经济困难 financial problem  


Dear Sir or Madam,  
I am writing to ask about studying English at University of Brighton…  
____________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,  
Li Hua  
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。

用户练习作文:

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask about studying English at University of Brighton. English is my favorite subject at school. I have always scored high marks in my English examinations. I also enjoy writing emails to my uncle who lives in Britain. Last year, I went to visit him in Nottingham. England is a wonderful place for me to improve my English. Please send me details of your English study programmes. I am interested in courses of writing. Could you tell me the entrance requirements for foreign students? I would also like to know what kinds of services University of Brighton offers to foreign students. I don't have any financial problems about my study because my uncle has promised to pay for my tuition. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Li Hua

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