3. 参考词汇:经济困难 financial problem
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask about studying English at University of Brighton. English is my favorite subject at school. I have always scored high marks in my English examinations. I also enjoy writing emails to my uncle who lives in Britain. Last year, I went to visit him in Nottingham. England is a wonderful place for me to improve my English. Please send me details of your English study programmes. I am interested in courses of writing. Could you tell me the entrance requirements for foreign students? I would also like to know what kinds of services University of Brighton offers to foreign students. I don't have any financial problems about my study because my uncle has promised to pay for my tuition. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Li Hua