2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(95):留学信

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇。

My hobby，as well as what I am really good at ,is photography，especially in foreground,as I have mastered its basic knowledge by myself.Often do I surf on the Internet to search for useful material and appreciate other cameramen well-known works,which,unfortunately,I find adversity in comprehension,due to my poor English.Therefore,the purpose of my application to the university is to improve my English so as to further my skill in photography. In addition,after my self-intriduction,may I have your requirements for overseas students in detail and what kind of service the university would offer,too?That will be of great favour. By the way, I paid a two-week visit,last year, to my uncle in Nottingham,who promised to sponsor my tuition,so there will not be any financial problem if I am admitted into University of Brington. In conclusion,I wish my dream of University of Brighton would come true.