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文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；文章层次较为清晰；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误。
As the economy development level arise，there are certain issues relevant to our daily life floating out of water. To be precisely，it is the potential problems which the economy development makes stand out.There are disputes over whether the economic disparity has an impact on friendship or not. Apparently，as far as I am concerned，the hallow friendship will be not influenced by the economic disparity. Firstly，as is known to all that a friend in need is a friend indeed. The pure friendship is far more evaluated by relying on money. In contrast，the economic disparity enhance relationship among people. The affluent company can rescue the impoverish partner on essential occasion. Moreover，this a good approach to maintain the friendship. Secondly，people who have paid little attention to money are accustomed to making good friends. After all，once one who is in preference to material stuff just as money，to some extent ，is not always recommended by the majorities of people.As the great part of people think，the earning money capacity can reflect your ability and status in some way.When we friends get together，we merely share the joys and sorrows beyond money topics. To sum，the precious and pure friendship transcends money and nothing can replace it.We are proud of our friends due to their great accomplishments and pay tribute to them at the bottom of heart. The economic disparity will not impact on our friendship.
