3. 参考词汇:经济困难 financial problem
文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;文中应增加从句和复合句的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
There are various perspectives on the question of whether or not men and women are equally good at all jobs.While some still hold to the conservative view that certain jobs are better performed by men and others by women,it is my personal belief that people of either gender are capable of doing any job effectively. The reasons for this are twofold.Firstly,I would argue that it is a mistake to base our views on traditional ideas about men and women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate.Although it is true that some characteristics are typically male and others are typically female,there are exceptions to every rule.Conventional gender roles are not appropriate for every individual.For example,not all women are physically weak,just as not all men are incompetent communicators.Secondly,I would contend that the presence of both genders in one workplace brings a sense of balance.Men and women frequently,though by no means always,have different methods of solving problems.We should view these differences as opportunities for innovation instead of judging them to be weakness. In summary,I reaffirm my argument that both male and female employees are an asset to any industry.In this regard,one should not be dissuaded from choosing an occupation simply because of his/her gender.