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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文中词汇表达较为多样,但请认真检查词汇的拼写。

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Nowadays,the relationship between computer and man becomes closer and closer.We use computer to watch movies,listen music, write issues,play games,and computer becomes part of our lives. Additioan to these fuctions,computer has made the life easier, faster and more comfortble.Take me as an example,I'm a girl who is obessesed by nice clothes while not courage enough walking along the streets under the strong sunshine to buy one,then i go the computer surfing on the internet.Another example,when i miss a friend who is so far away that i can not see her soon, i turn to the computer and use msn to talk with her.Also,i can buy food, books,flight ticket,ect by using computer. All in all, I think the invetion of computer is a great one that make our life so different and so colorful,and i really gratful for it.

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