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2007年6月英语六级作文真题:学雷锋

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:47浏览次数:1072
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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed 
1.有的人认为应该有回报 
2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报 
3.我的看法 
用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

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The argument over whether we do good deeds for a reward is heated.Some argue strongly that great deeds deserve recognition and acclaim.In this selfish and materialistic world,it is vitally important to recognize and promote various noble deeds.Rewarding and encouraging good deeds helps set an inspiring example to the public. The opposing view is that we should perform good deeds without expectations of any outcomes or rewards.Acknowledgements and credit shouldn't be given people who do good deeds with mixed motives.For example,some entrepreneurs supporting charity aims at tax reduction instead of lending a helping hand to others with a real motive.So we should do something good for others like Lei Feng without expectations of any economic and immaterial return. From my perspective,doing good deeds in exchange for rewards isn't an offense.We merit them.In fact,receiving sufficient public praise and attention serves as a contributing force behind the widespread promotion of good values.A role model sometimes outweighs a sole good deed.

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