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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；句式变化较丰富，若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒。
Nowadays,the children willing to spend much more time play but doing housework at home. However,there are some parents pay the money to the children to do housework.Do you think this is a good idea ? Facing this issue,it has both advantages and disadvantages.the advantages are to let childs know the money is not easy to earn,also can stimulate their saving money potential.But the disadvantages is the child may ignore their study.instead of ,the child on the go to doing housework to earn more money,so that their can but whatever their want. In my opinion , I am in favor of the latter view that because this way not only can strengthen their awareness of responsibility but also can let their know is Not want to give how much is how much,you must do something before you take it
