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Will Tourism Bting Harm to the environment ? It is mutual benefit relationship for evironment and Tourists ,Tourists should take care the evironment ,while the goverment should do some measure to protect it . Many people like tourism in their vacation .In one hand, the tourism creates the profit to the local people, In other hand , too many tourists als bring environment questions .for example , the more and more rubbish and the cheat business ,which make the environment bears the pollution and bad image .Therefor, I think the government should do some guide measure to change the tourism habit and set the law to pulish the people who make the serious harm for environment. Environment is our friend also is valuable material , all people have the duty to protect it .
