题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Nowadays,more and more people recognized that the exhausted and improper development of industry has destoryed the environment of our earth.They think social sciences and humanities should play a more important role in 21st century. In last century,with the development of industry, some problems become very serious,such as air pollution,water pollution,the extinguish of some animals,globe warming and so on.Through the whole world,people facing more and more circumstance problems.If people do nothing about it , the earth will not provide suitable place where people can live in in the future. By learning social sciences and humanities,people will recognize, it is important for human to live with their surroundings which includes the animals,the plants,other peoples and so on.People should make harmonious relationship with others.Only when we learn how to protect the surrounding, we can preserve the nature resource for our descendants.Only when we learn how to cooperate with other people,we can achieve success more easily.Only we protect animals and plants, we can keep the balance in the nature.In a word, only when people real know the essence of social science and humanities,mankind should have a bright future.