2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

On maintaining trust As far as we realized,it is presenting the phenomenon that maintaining trust has turned to be more important.The reason is as followe. Firstly,trust is based on ourselves.Trusting others means we ought to believe that they won't attack me,even he will help me do something we can't deal with.Secondly,mataining trust enough probably make us become friends,and we both will give a hand each other.Thirdly,trusting others are responsiable for ourselves and the world,which gain our friendship. But how to maintaining trust is the center of the problem.In view of my eyes,we can maintain trust in our life.For example,the work which are not able to finish can be sent to someone who you believe.It is the trust.Only maintaining trust we can live believily in the world.