2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As is vividly depicted in the picture above .Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates. higher degree workers average has higher earning and lower unemployment.less than highschool diploma. usually face higher unmeployment rate .and lower earning. To begin with ,a person received higher education and they can lerned higher skill,