2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；注意文中较多的句法错误；文中词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

Nowadays,the highly speed of technology devoloping,the increasing number of individuals who using computer. First and foremost,the computer is a new tool of human created,it brought us into a new generation.We can count and analisy on computer.Futhermore,following with the net,we could arrive every details of news worldwide,meanwhile,it cuts off the wasted and it makes us to live better! All in all,computer is very important machine for people,maybe we can live without it for 2 days,however,we could'not survive living without it for 2 months.Computer and Net have changed our life