2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

过程性词汇偏少；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

judging from the table ,we can finally that people's income depends on their education levels.Above all the average college graduates earn much more than high school graduates. From these date ,we can finger out a degree does bring distinctive benfits to its holders. But bright future only need high degree? In fact ,I dont think so .O the one hand ,someone recived high education ,college not only teacher them skill,but also they build good study habits. when they leave school and they will continue keep study habits. On the other hand .a employer need some person whome ability and performance isgood .not one have high greed but no have high skill. In conclusion, we need contidue leaning skills,as a high graduates.however ,we must build ' good habite.