Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富;有效的运用了一些复杂句。
Nowadays,the children willing to spend much more time play but doing housework at home. However,some parents pay the money to the children to do housework.Do you think this is a good idea? Facing this issue,it has both advantages and disadvantages.the advantages are to let children know the money is not easy to earn,can also stimulate their saving money potential.But the disadvantages is the child may ignore their study.instead of ,the child on the go to doing housework to earn more money,so that their can but whatever their want. In my opinion , I am in favor of the latter view that because this way not only can strengthen their awareness of responsibility but also can let their know is Not want to give how much is how much,you must do something before you take it