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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第8篇:工作的舒心比高薪水更重要

发布时间:2013-08-08 17:34浏览次数:982
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Being happy with a job is more important than having a high salary.

工作的舒心比高薪水更重要。不同人有不同的看法。

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作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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There is no denying the fact that the relationship of salary and being happy with a job has become the utmost concern among people in recent days. As to me, my opinion is we should pursue the comfortable sensation of our jobs, certainly, the premise is our salary can make us comfortable life. To bolster my stance, I will explore the point as following. First of all, it is to support ourselves we go to work. If our wage can not afford to pay our daily expenses, being happy with a job will be a joke for us. For example, if we who are taking a credit card bill, and found our salary can not pay to the bill, can we continue to this job? The answer is very clear. So, the salary is the first, being happy with a job is the second. Next, we can try to alter our working attitude to face a does not like work. Most of the time, we does not like our work is because we do not find the joy of work. Try to charge our attitude, and discover the fun of our work, we will have loved our jobs. People`s attitude usually affect their behavior. For instance, the custom is more like which partner, the face with smile or stranger? I think most of the people can in favor of the first. And the cooperation is achieved, the salary will also rises. In sum, first alive, then strong. Despite the salary is very important for us, but a happy state of mind is more important. We face the work in an optimistic mood, then the work will give us a different future. And the direct result is a lucrative salary.

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