2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意。

On excessive packaging The excessive packaging has a sharp increase in daily life , almost all the goods have their beatiful outfit in order to attract to more customers . As far as I concerned , there are several reasons for this : First, the life level is more and more rising , and people 's requires for life are more and more serious ,they have enough money to buy what they like .In second ,the market compete also leads to the cost at the package . Basically , it is not a balance relationship between the seller with the buyer ,which make the seller make the excessive packaging. Therefore ,I think the customers should wise to slect the commodity that is good for saving resource , and the seller should change their idea for sales, instead of just using the big cost at packaging .