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作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
We are luckily to have the chances to access to the ideal colleges after making three years efforts. When we are signing at time fleeting, we encounter another crossing of life. Graduating from our alma mater, the graduates who had finished scholarship and acquired diploma confront a urgent task of seeking for a job. In the course of studying in university, not only can we be imparted knowledge on specific fields but also we are informed of the significance of virtues. It is no denying that the latter virtues do more matters to graduates than the professional knowledge. Among all the virtues, as far as I am concerned, diligence is the most important virtue. First of all, as proverb goes, diligence makes up slump. The graduates who have just left universities are inexperienced in their occupation. It is essential for them to set their foot on the ground and seize the opportunity to learn. Diligence plays the most important roles in the process of acquiring learning. The employees are customarily to paying attention to the hard-working employees. Diligence give you change to stand out and distinct from others. Well begun is half of success. Furthermore, it helps you clinch reliability from your boss and places the foundation for promotion. Secondly, diligent persons teem with colorful life experiences. Beside the excellent performance in your career, diligence will save up a large amount of time for you to follow you bent to accomplish your wants. You are entitled to read a book or magazine for your entertainment, and you can go out for a walk or play badminton and basketball with your companies. I can make a bet that diligence will make your life become a miracle which is a boon for yourself and all the people who are always keeping eyes on you. To sum up, diligence has been passed on since the ancient time dated back to five thousand years ago, and now diligence should still be advocated. As one of the most important virtue in Chinese nation, it has bore the examination of period trends and will never be out of date.
