2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:雾霾天气（haze weather)

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It is inconvenience when people do something in the life. The haze weather bring the acute respiratory disease and the problems of traffic. What is more, the man will feel uncomfortable when he stay this haze weather too long time. In my feeling, I hate this weather.As know to us, automobile exhaust massive emissionse result in this bad weather,so we must control this harmful gas. According that, more bike than car.