2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Salary Works Ok,we see the ptictruer olid down to ours salary,in differt works has lost of salary,high and low. This is due to people works not the means,so lend do salary low or high.Howover,and about thire education has diffcult,cuture allso.Nowday,them salary up to.It import that degree also up to them salary. Just so we need leaning many of knowledeges,devolopment our able.