2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

The way to Success As far as we realized,it is presnting the phenomenon that success has become a signal of our selves and turn to be the point of our life.Nevertheless,it is a difficult thing to be successful.Thus,the way to success is frequently considered in the world. At the beginning,we ought to be active.Whatever we treat it,we should work positivily.Only in an aspiring way to work we can finish it better. Next,we are supposed to trust ourselves.Following the trust we can work it out in a best way ignore of our ability,and we will complete more believily. Besides,holding the oppertunity is vital.It is cognized that the oppertunity is not showing at any place.Therefore,we should get it in our hand,and we must try it without any thinkable. However ,the most important step is that we can work hard for a long time.With the losing of the time,it is probably casuing that we stand where we start.Forasmuch, we will be required to insist.That is the reason why most people say hard-working is the crux to the success. In a word,the way to success is colorful and different,but all roads to Rome,so we can take some steps to get suceess.Maybe you will do it.