2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

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Nowadays,the air pollution becomes worse and worse.Facing this situation, some people came up with a idea, to tax private car owners.As far as I'm concerned, it is quite a good idea.Thus, I am for the idea. I support the idea cause it benefits both of the enviroment and the car owners themselves. On the one hand, some people will deeply consider whether they should buy a car or not because of the pressure coming with the private car tax, which will less the stress of the traffic jam. And it will also reduce the air pollution efficiently. On the other hand, as for the private car owners, the idea is beneficial to their health. We all know that some private never do any sport. Then they become fatter and fatter, which cause a lot of diseases at the same time. However, I do believe that the situation would be better if this idea is carried out. Because of the tax, the car owners may reduce their time in driving. They may choose cycling or walking, which benefit a lot to their health. In a word, taxing on private car can help all of us. People can enjoy the clean air again and car owners can have a health body. Therefore, I hope the measure can be carried out as soon as possible!