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Learn To Smile In our life ,we can talk to others by smile,we can know others by smile,we can get along well with others by smile. We should smile to others when somebody make us angry or someone be angry with us.We wii get along better if we often smile to others. Smile not only a expression but also a language. It can encourage our friends and make us confident. The more times we smile to others,the happier we are. Learn to smile ,and the world wii be full of more and more love.