小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a best friend who I have known for three years. His name is Ru Dejian. I would often call him "Hua-ge" because he is too handsome and many girls like him. Ru Dejian is 174cm tall and average height in the class. He is about 50 kg, one of the lightest in weight among the boys. He is very tanned because he loves to exercise. Dejian exercises frequently about four times a week. Although he stays very farawag from me but he would come to my house after school to study together.