托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第7篇:如何看待电视、电影对孩子的影响

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There is no denying the fact that television and movies more and more affect children`s behavior has become the utmost concern among people in recent days. As to me, my opinion is that parents can give some directions when they fact to children`s behavior affected by television and movies. To bolster my stance, I will explore the point as follows. First of all, it is the fact children`s behavior is the result of to be affected by some aspects, include television, movies, parents`action and so on. Due to parents` pressure is continuous rising as same as tide, the result of the time of children had been accompanied by parents is less and less. Children who may gain more information through some aspects, can discover the colorful world and do the best interest things. This is a good thing. We as parent can advocate it. Next, parents give to children some advises, rather than parents control the behavior of children. For example, my kid`s hair is dyed blue, cause my sense is not very good. I who can order kid to dye hair from blue to black, can tell him his hair`s color let me feel to he is bad boy, and hope him keep his natural hair`s color. Like this, base on balance communication, children also love to excharge idea with their parent. In sum, only though right directions, can children live in happy condition. As to parents, we who need to alter our attitude, help kids to live in pleasure, and grow with children.