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I have a best friend who I have known for three years. His name is Ru Dejian. I would often call him "Hua-ge" because he is too handsome and many girls like him. Ru Dejian is 174cm tall and average height in the class. He is about 50 kg, one of the lightest in weight among the boys. He is very tanned because he loves to exercise. Dejian makes four times a week to exercise. Although he stays very faraway from me but he would come to my house after school to study together. Dejian is my best friend because we have many things in common that we share with each other. He is also willing to help others when in need. For instance, he would not reject whom many of the weaker students ask him for help. Dejian is a qentleman who is also very polite. We sit together in the class and talks whenever we have the chance to. Like any boy, there are things that Dejian loves and some he does not. He loves to study because he can have a stalle future in China. He also loves play computer games and soccer. His favorite computer game is "LoL". While he loves red colour, he dislikes black colour because black represents a lost of hope. Dejien does not like to eat meat because the meat in school is not clean as there are bird far on it. Dejian is an excellont student in his studies. He has won for himself a lot of awards in the past year such as the global mathematics award, best student of the year and little professor award in history. I do appreiate to have a friend like Dejian. He taught me a lot of things such as studies, knowledge and good habits. I will miss him.
