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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3577
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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能较准确地使用学术词汇,还需请作者增加词汇丰富度;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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The pie chart illustrates the fast food preferences of the USA teenagers. As we can see from the chart, hamburgers account for the main place of the proportion is about 33%. The proportion of pizza and French fires are similar and occupy 48% constituting 26% and 22% respectively. The popularity degree of fried chicken and tacos among USA teenagers are similar too, one is 9% and the other is 7%. Sushi represent the smallest percentage is 3% and it is just one third of the fired chicken. In general, hamburgers, pizza and French fries are the three main fast food among teenagers in the USA. These three kinds of fast food account for 81% of all the fast food preferences pie chart. The total percentage of fried chicken, tacos and sushi are less than French fries. It is describes that traditional western style fast foods in USA are more popular in teenagers.

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