2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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on escessive packaging There is no doudlt that more and more goods are made more excessive packaging. why make it happen ? Now our contury become better and better than before. So people have more mony buy angthing .becouse of this ,some people who sell goods want to make a many mony ,they take goods with expenceve packaging. And people think goods on excessive packaging is make they have a good feeling with others .So more and more things are not useful for us. In my opinion ,I thik goods must have same thing to make them look beatue .But this does not do it too mach.