初中英语命题作文真题演练(89):生活离不开水

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We need water every time and we drink the water at least 2,000 ml. but now, the water was unclear and dreadful taste. In many countries, there are many factories putting the black water to the river and the lake. Now safe water is less and less, protecting the water is so crucial that we need to do more for our lives and the environment. The most terrible thing that the waste water will threaten the surrounding villages and made strange diseases and pollute the soil. But in a few countries, they have technology to turn the water safely. However, the best method of protection is to stop the mills to make the waste water and plant more aquatic plants to make the water clearer and not pungent. If we do that, the amount of the water that can be drunk will be more and more. Now, the reporters let everyone know that we have to do more for the earth. In spite of this, the factories’ managers aren’t happy, but they can't change people's mind for their factories. Let's bless our earth, our future and our water!